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考前提醒:这些英语作文的隐形错误你要注意

考研英语  时间: 2019-04-08 14:07:00  作者: 匿名 

  摘要:在最后的备考阶段,各位考研er们很多时候只注意抓大的要点复习,却忽视了很多细节方面的问题,最后可能造成感觉自己答题还不错,可是分数却不高的情况。这些英语作文中的隐形错误你要注意。

  ►指代方面的错误

  在使用代词it,he,this,that,which,one等时,前文中应出现明确的先行词。

  如:“Since we cannot know what particular bit of knowledge a child will need in the future,it is senseless to force him to learn it.”,这句话中,him和it这两个代词都有明确的先行词,分别是a child和knowledge,因此句子的含义非常清楚。

  可是,不少学生在使用这些代词时,虽然自己很清楚它们指代的是什么,但在作文中却没有交代清楚,结果这些代词非但没有使行文简洁,反而造成了意思上的模糊,让阅卷老师不知所云。

  误:Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.

  正:Sometimes the teacher will inform students of the heavy burden he has to bear.

  ►修饰方面的错误

  修饰语应紧靠被修饰的成分,并和它形成正确的逻辑关系。如果修饰语的位置不妥当,就会造出模棱两可的病句。

  误:To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.

  正:To keep the air clean, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.

  ►一致方面的错误

  在一个句子内部或紧邻的两三个句子之间,要保持时态、人称、数量的一致。

  误:Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.

  正:Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.

  ►平行结构方面的错误

  这里专指语态、比较级、非谓语形式、冠词用法、可数名词和不可数名词、不定代词单复数以及时态等错误。

  1、误:Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.

  正:narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)

  误:A great change has been taken place since then.

  正:A great change has taken place since then.

  误:But it may occur some new problems.

  正:But some new problems may occur/arise.

  误:Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.

  正:Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.

  2、误:The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.

  正:The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.

  误:Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.

  正:Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.

  误:Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.

  正:Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.

  ►断句方面的错误

  一句句子没有结束,又开始新的一句,结果造成句子结构不全,这就成为断句。

  误:TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.

  正:TV becomes an important part in our daily life,because we cannot live without it.

  ►连词方面的错误

  作文中缺少必要的连词,或错用连词的现象也比较普遍。

  误:One should improve his English,one should overcome difficulties in studies.

  正:If one wants to improve his English,he should overcome difficulties in studies.

  ►搭配方面的错误

  学生作文中用词搭配方面的错误也占有较大比例。曾经在一次作文阅卷中,近千篇作文在表达“上海交通越来越拥挤”这个意思时,几乎没有一篇用 heavier,大多数人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded,而traffic是不能与crowded搭配的。

  1、误:However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.

  正:However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.

  2、误:In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.

  正:In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldn’t afford it.

  由此可见,要提高对词语搭配的驾驭能力,除了要在平时的阅读过程中多积累,还需要克服中文中诸如“速度快”、“价格贵”、“学习知识”、“人减少”等搭配的影响,避免写出look book或see book这样的笑话来。

  ►误用方面

  学生作文中对词语的误用也相当普遍,误用词语不仅不能准确地表达作者的意思,而且也会闹出笑话。

  1、误:With the industrious development,there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

  正:With the industrial development,there is a great need for different kinds of energy.

  2、误:Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.

  正:Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.

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