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英语四级写作高分训练月计划第三周:星期二(2)

考研英语  时间: 2019-04-08 14:09:53  作者: 匿名 

  二、短句的用法
  长句固然能表达出复杂而缜密的思想,但如果片面追求复杂句式,华而不实,反而成为表达的累赘。因此,写作中句子的长短应根据表达的需要,有话则长,无话则短。
  短句比较简洁、明快、有力、适合陈述重要的事实或想法。短句不仅指句子长度较短,也指句子内部结构精炼。

  如:
  
原句:Many automobile parts that are made of plastics and other synthetic materials do not last long .
  优化:Many automobile parts made of plastics and other synthetic materials do not last long .
  原句:He didn't have enough experience , which is the reason why he didn't do the work well .
  优化:He didn't do the work well for lack of experience .

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