英语四级写作高分训练月计划第四周:作文热点预测28
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Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Man Proposes , God Disposes . You should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese :
1.如何理解“谋事在人,成事在天”这句谚语。
2.试举例论证其中的道理。
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框架搭建:通过审题可知这是一篇论证观点类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段解释“谋事在人,成事在天”的含义,阐述其中蕴含的道理;第二段举例论证该道理;第三段重申该谚语的正确性,呼应第一段。
Man Proposes , God Disposes
There is a widespread proverb , " Man Proposes , God Disposes " . which means that the planning lies with man , the outcome with Heaven . This proverb reflects a relation between success and luck , that is , we should always work hard in order to achieve our goal , though sometimes we may meet unexpected things .
Let me take English study for example . A student spends much time and energy on English , and he has good study habits . He is supposed to receive good grades in the examination . But suppose something unexpected , like illness , occurs , and his final score is far from ideal . Should he lose heart and become pessimistic ? Of course not . What he should do is just keep it up , and next time luck will most probably favor him .
From my point of view , luck does influence or even dominate us sometimes , but in any case we are the master of our own fortune . It is up to ourselves whether we want to go ahead or backward . As long as you insist working hard , your effort will pay in the long run .