英语四级写作高分训练月计划第二周:原因类实战
Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Pets' Services . You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline given below :
1.如今宠物服务十分流行。
2.分析宠物服务流行的原因。
3.谈谈你的看法。
参考范文 Pets' Services
第一段:概述现象段
Nowadays , more and more pets' services emerge in the markets , which have aroused great concern . Many people send their pets to the related shops to accept the pets' service and the pets do become more beautiful and healthier than ever before . In addition , pets' services are diversified , such as pets' barbershops and pets' canteens . The reasons for this phenomenon are varied .
第二段:说明原因段
Among all these reasons , the owner's love for pets plays a critical role . Regarding pets as friends and family members , people would like to spend some money on their pets . Moreover , with the improvement of people's living standartls , the pets' service , a new and profitable business attracts a lot of people's attention . Besides , large investment in pets' services makes the popularity of these services possible .
第二段:总结观点段
In my opinion , pets' services do good to both the society and the individual . For one thing , it can offer more job opportunities and stimulate the development of economy . For another , it makes the pets more pleasing to both the eye and the mind , thus people becoming happier when stay with their beautiful pets . Therefore , the development of pets' services should be encouraged .