英语四级写作高分训练月计划第四周:作文热点预测29
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Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Food Poisoning Accident . You should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese :
你的几个同学因食用从某超市买回的食品而中毒,幸亏及时治疗而胶险。请描述他(们)中毒与脱险的过程,并呼吁要加强食品安全。
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框架搭建:通过审题可知这是一篇记叙文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段交代食物中毒的背景和原因;第二段叙述中毒和脱险的经过;第三段谈谈由此引发的感想,呼吁加强食品安全。
A Food Poisoning Accident
Last month , I witnessed a food poisoning accident happening to my classmates . At that time the situation was really very dangerous and urgent . Though finally they got out of danger , this accident is still vivid in my mind .
Thta day was Julie's birthday . In order to celebrate it , her roommates bought a big birthday cake for her from a supermarket nearby . They shared the cake happily . However , after a while , all of them felt abdominal pain and dizziness . Two of them even cannot stand up because of great pain . We rushed to send them to the hospital . It turned out that the cake they ate had expired its guarantee period . Fortunately , due to timely treatment , they all recovered very soon .
However , this accident leaves me a deep ponder . I think it is very urgent to take effective measures to improve food safety . On one hand , the govermment should strengthen supervision and administration on iood satety . On the other hand , we consumers should be more careful . Only in this way can we make sure that no same accident happens .