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2013新托福考试指导:写作十大易丢分细节(2)

考研英语  时间: 2019-04-08 14:09:45  作者: 匿名 

  6.固定用法错误
  To some extends, I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.
  To some extends应改为To some extent。

  7.例证夸张
  For example, when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer, the doctor cannot tell the truth, for the truth may cause the patient’s immediate death.
  虽然善意的谎言是必要的,但是其功效显然没有这么大。

  8.成分多余
  According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs.
  该句中的shows that是多余的成分。

  9.词性混乱
  However, the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly.
  句子中的privacy和embarrassingly应该改成private和embarrassing。

  10.时态错误
  托福大作文一般使用现在时态,除了拿过去事件作为例子,用过去时态。
  Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation.
  claimed应该改为claim。

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