英语四级写作高分训练月计划第三周:星期三(4)
考研英语
时间: 2019-04-08 14:09:52
作者: 匿名
四、含有非谓语动词的句子
非谓语动词包括:动词不定式、动名词、现在分词和过去分语。使用非谓语动词可以用较少的词表达同等甚至更加丰富的信息,使句子结构紧凑、逻辑严谨。
如:
原句:It must be realized that people should be cautious when they decide which books they should choose to read since if they read bad books , it will be time-wasting and harmful .
优化:It must be realized that people should be cautious when deciding which books to read since reading bad books in time-wasting and harmful .
原句:Because one of my parents is laid off , my family can't possibly afford all my expenses at college .
优化:With one of my parents being laid off , my family can't possibly afford all my expenses at college .