英语四级写作高分训练月计划第四周:作文热点预测15
热点演练15
Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On Working at Home. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline ( given in Chinese ) below :
1.近年来,一些公司允许员工在家办公。
2.分析在家办公的利弊。
3.谈谈你的看法。
参考范文
框架搭建:由标题和提纲所列内容可知,本文应为一篇对比分析类作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段描述员工可以在家办公这现现象,指出其有利有弊;第二段对比分析在家办公的利弊;第三段谈谈自己对在家办公的看法和理由。
On Working at Home
With the widespread of telephone , computer and fax machine , it is not difficult to deal with work at home . However , as to the advantages and disadvantages of working at home , different people will give different opinions .
Those people who advacate working at home believe that it can save the commuting time from home to workplace , which can thereby increase working time . Moreover , working at home can guarantee people against the interference of the noise which is typically in offices , However , still others object to working at home . They argue that people are more likely to become sluggish if working at home . Besides , working at home might make companies unable to respond to those emergencies which need the joint efforts of all employees .
Weighing up the pros and cons , I do not support working at home . For one thing , it may cut off people's basic communication with their colleagues , which will result in the feeling of isolation . For another , it may decrease efficiency , since people always have housework to tend . Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration , I may reasonably conclude that people should not be encouraged to work at home .