英语四级写作高分训练月计划第三周:星期四(4)
考研英语
时间: 2019-04-08 14:09:56
作者: 匿名
四、学会使用动态动词
动态动词往往经be , ther be , make , need等静态动词更有活力,可以达到更好的写作效果。
如:
原句:Please try our best to help this girl , help her to pass the most difficult period in life , and make her financial burden less and less .
优化:Please try our best to help this girl , help her to pass the most difficult period in life , and relieve her financial burden .
原句:Each day , we can see there are a lot of foods in the garbage cans .
优化:Each day , we can see many students dump foods in the garbage cans .