正文：

3段，7句，100-130词，3-5个关联词，3-5个从句

1、第一段：1-2句

1)自我介绍：私人书信除外

(1)工作人员：

A.05:I am a staff member of your company.

B.06:I am a staff member of Motorola (China) Electronics Ltd.

(2)学生：

A.07：I am a freshman/sophomore/junior/senior/undergraduate/

graduate in the Department of Chinese Language and Literature of Peking University.

B.12:I am the president of the Students’ Union of Beijing Foreign Studies University.

2)写作目的：书信中心思想，改写提纲一

(1)08： I am writing the letter for purpose of expressing my sincere apology to you.(道歉信)

(2)09/12：I am writing the letter to give/propose/offer some/several useful/conducive/practical suggestions/proposals/

recommendations to you.(建议信)

(3)11： I am writing the letter to recommend my favorite movie to you.(推荐信)

2、第二段：3句左右，改写提纲二

1)主题句：1句

2)分论点一：1句

3)分论点二：1句

3、第三段：2句

1)表示感谢：部分私人书信除外

(1)My thanks for you to your generous help are beyond words.我对您慷慨帮助的感谢难以言表。

(2)Words fail me when I wish to express my sincere gratitude to you.感激之情，溢于言表。

(3)I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt appreciation to the kind assistance you render me.

我想借此机会对您的热心帮助表示衷心的感谢。

2)期待回信

(1)I look forward to hearing from you soon.盼即赐复。

(2)I am looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.

期待您在方便之时尽快给予我圆满的答复。

(3)Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated. 十分感谢您对我的询问给予及时的关注。

3)写作目的

落款：

1、结尾客套：

1)万能：Yours sincerely,或Sincerely yours,

2)私人：Yours faithfully,或Faithfully yours,

3)公务：Yours truly,或Truly yours,

2、落款：Li Ming或Zhang Wei

书写格式：缩进式

段与段之间不空行，每段首行缩进四个字母