托福考试写作指导:作文低分的五大原因三
考研英语
时间: 2019-04-08 14:09:24
作者: 匿名
悬垂修饰语(Dangling Modifiers)
所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清。例如:At the age of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中at the age of ten只点出十岁时,但没有说明“ 谁”十岁时。按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点,全句就不那么费解了。
改为:When I was ten, my grandfather died.
例1. To do well in college, good grades are essential.
剖析:句中不定式短语 to do well in college的逻辑主语不清楚。
改为:To do well in college, a student needs good grades.