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英语四级写作高分训练月计划第三周:星期一(3)

考研英语  时间: 2019-04-08 14:09:53  作者: 匿名 

  三、典型真题词句点评
  Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reading Selectively or Extensively ? You should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese :
  1.有人认为读书要有选择。
  2.有人认为应当博览群书。
  3.你的看法。

  范文
  (1)When it comes to reading way , there is no complete agreement among people .(2①) Some people (3①) take it for granted that reading should be selective . (2②) However , others (3②) maintain that it (4①) does more good to read extensively .
  (5①) Those people who hold the first opinion (3③) believe reading selcetively can save much time and (6) enable them to have enough time to (7) digest (8) what they have read . (9①) In addition , they (3④) insist that books of low quality (10①) mqy (4②) do harm to the youths (11①) who lack enough ability to tell the true from the false . (5②) However , still others think differently . (3⑤) In their opinions , students cannot get a general view about the would (12) without extensive reading . (9②) Besides , extensive reading can (13) extend their range of knowledge and broaden their vision .
  (14) Weighing up these two arguments , Iprefer the former one . (9③) For one thing . (15) as a college student , we should choose those books (16) suitable to our reading level . (9④) For another , (17) without selection , our reading (10②) may become (17) aimless and blind , (11②) which will be (18) less efficient . (19) Considering these , we (10③) may reasonably conclude that college students should read selectively .

  点评
  
句式上:本文长短句搭配合理,句式富于变化,句子之间和句子内部紧凑连贯,句子表达简洁明快。
  用词上:本文用词简洁具体,富于变化,词性多样,体现出较强的语言驾驭能力。
  (1)用于引出有争议的话题时常用用的句式。
  (2)用于提出两种对立观点时常用的句式。
  (3)用不同的词表示“认为”用词富于变化。
  (4)前者意为“有好处”,后者意为“有害处”。
  (5)用于引出每一种观点的理由。
  (6)意为“使……能够”。
  (7)意为“消化”,用词形象生动。
  (8)what引导宾语从句。
  (9)列举时常用的衔接词语,使文章条理清晰。
  (10)使用限定词,使表达更加客观。
  (11)注意定语从句的运用。
  (12)介词短语without……相当于条件从句。
  (13)意为“拓宽知识面和视野”。
  (14)用于表明个人倾向,动名词短语开头。
  (15)介词短语开头,句式富于变化。
  (16)形容词短语做后置定语。
  (17)形容词使用恰当。
  (18)比较级使用恰当。
  (19)用于得出结论,动名词短语开头。

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