英语四级写作高分训练月计划第一周:应用文2
二、投诉信结构公式
右上角:日期。
左上角:称呼。
正文:
第一段:表明自己的身份,说明写信目的,因何事投诉何人或机构。
第二段:具体阐述投诉的内容和投诉的理由。
第三段:提出解决建议并期望尽快解决,表示感谢。
右下角:署名。
例(2002年1月)
Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus . You should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese :
假如你是李明,请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信,内容应涉及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境和服务等,可是以表扬,可以是批评建议,也可以兼而有之。
参考范文
Dec.20 , 2009
Dear President ,
My name is Li Ming . I am a junior from the Civil Engineering School . I venture to write you a letter to make a complaint about the canteen service of our school .
The focus of the complaint is the poor quality and high price of the food . On one hand , the rice is very hard , the steam bread is often cold , and the vegetables are always overcooked . On the other hand , the price of the food is so high that many poor students are burdened heavily . Under these circumstances , I find it impossible for us students to fully concentrate on the study and enjoy the campus life .
I will be very obliged if you can consider my complaint seriously . I do hope the service of the canteen will be much improved as soon as possible . Thank you for your time and kind consideration .
yours ,
Li Ming