The picture describes an increasingly common scenario in today's world. An employee quits her previous job and carries the company's confidential commercial information to her new position, which quite angers(annoyes) her former boss. Meanwhile, the employee herself is ignorant of her misbehavior, but only indulges in the happiness of a better career development.

　　I would like to begin the discussion by relating the background of this phenomenon. As China has experienced, and is experiencing,() a prosperous economic boom with numerous companies mushrooming, people start to throw away the deep-rootedthought(viewpoint) that one should keep a single job as a life-long pursuit. Instead, job hopping has() become(s) as common as daily meals. A series of problems thus emerge, including how employees stick to their occupational discipline to keep secrets of different organizations. Some people are offered a new position merely for the much(high)intelligence they command, while others might reveal confidential information unconsciously. Their behavior leads to unfair competition and damage(s) the otherwise well-functioning economic order.

　　In my point of view, for one thing, all employees need to(should) be instilled with honesty and loyalty. Honesty records should be established to evaluate employees' credibility. For another, therefore(there) should be interferences from relevant laws and regulations in order to chastise those whose telltale action() results in great harm.

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